PRACTICE YOUR ENGLISH

Dear friend,
Are you tired of the daily grind? Sick of working all hours of the day for litle reward? Tired of having enough money to really enjoy yourself? Well, now there is a way out.
We can show the way to give up work. Sit back and make millions for yourself and your loved ones on property market.
Albert Smith felt just like you untill he read our leaflet. Now he drives a sport car arround the South of France and his wife has one of her own too.

Generic Structure Analyse
Thesis; there is a way out of financial problem.
Argument; Albert Smith is the proof.
Recommendation; Join property market !
Language Feature Analysis
Using abstract noun; reward
Using action verb; give up, make, etc
Using thinking verb; felt
Using simple present tense; are you tired?, he drives a sport car, etc